Songfight entry (music)
by at 5:06 AM
For the first time in a long, long time I've done a Songfight entry. Comments?
(Yeah, I know it's really basic and simplistic... I had some pretty major ideas on how to do a full version but I don't have the time to do it properly before the deadline on Tuesday. It'll probably go onto foodsexsleep though.)
Comments
Mm. Not bad. It's a bit repetitive though.
I would suggest knocking out at least the second-last verse, replacing it with an instrumental bridge - preferably one dominated by a piano riff played by a piano that was added as backup two verses previous.
Okay, I rearranged the ending a bit, and added another layer of complexity to the piano track...