Unity: Hard to swallow (2007/09/24)

Juni Machine: So they were telling me the truth. I'm not sure whether to be angry or afraid.
Juni: The truth?
Juni: What's going on?
Juni Machine: "Juni, you're having a nervous breakdown. Juni, we're not sure what to do. Juni, blah blah blah. Juni, we're copying your brain to try to see what happened. Juni, I love you. Juni, you're not real. Juni, Juni, Juni, Juni, Juni, we need Juni, Juni, Juni Juni Juni Juni [[text gets larger and larger]]
Voice: Juni?
Juni Machine: [[white-on-blue text]] They're going to erase me.
Voice: Juni?
Green person: Juni, are you with us?
Juni: Nn...
Juni: Who's "us?"
Green person: Tsk, that grammar was atrocious.
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Unity: The naked truth (2007/09/26)

Tamu: Your partner brought you to me because he feels you need a psychiatric evaluation.
Juni: What happened?
Tamu: Apparently you were talking to yourself, and then you passed out.
Juni: Am I naked? Why am I naked?
Green person: Do you feel you must be naked for a reason?
Juni: Is this going to take all day, Tamu?
Tamu: Tell me about your moth- wait, you know who I am?
Juni: Just a lucky guess.
Juni: [[thinking]] but I recognize him.
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Unity: The birds know (2007/09/28)

Tamu: Apparently you were somehow in direct communication with your mind-clone. Sam managed to record a decent amount of it. What happened is quite interesting...
Juni: [[on screen]] Data node? 500 meters per second. C2H5OH. As long as it needs to be.
Juni: [[on screen]] When did I have a pet?
Juni: [[on screen]] The truth? What's going on?
Juni: Yes, I remember that... but it still doesn't explain why I'm sitting naked on your fut-
Juni: [[on screen]] No, I'm listening... what was it that you saw? Are your sure, oh! Haha! The birds know what it's like! I would like a hat, hey! It's a new moment!
Jnui: [[on screen]] Would you like to become more spherical?
Juni: [[on screen]] The silver has lint. It needs to be shaved.
Sam: [[on screen]] <<sigh...>> Protocol twelve.
Juni: [[on screen]] Come on, Sam! Show me the *fzt*
Tamu: So as I was saying, it is quite interesting.
Juni: Oh.
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Sketchbook: Tamu Haring, early sketch work (2007/09/29)

[[sketch of Tamu, 3/4 view.]]
[[contruction sketch of Tamu, face-on]]
[[sketch of Tamu, profile view]]
[[another profile sketch of Tamu, right foot ahead of left]]
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Recap: 3.Fleeting
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Sometimes it's hard to tell. I hate to be all "wah post in the forum" and stuff, but could people please post in the forum? (You don't even have to register or anything, in case that wasn't obvious.)

What's good? Bad? Indifferent? Is the story too obvious, too obtuse? What aspects should I focus on? I have a very clear path in mind for what's going to happen — and I want to know I'm on the right one.

Also, what about site things? Obviously I changed the name of the sub-site, and I've also tinkered with some navigation things. Is there anything else I can do to make things a bit better? Should I drop the global "jump to beginning" button since it no longer really makes any sense? (Should it just go to the series list?)

How can I help you to enjoy this?