152. Along came a sniper

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Sam: Are you really sure about this? I feel bad about leaving your mom home alone.
Juni: She'll be fine. Obviously she needs to catch up on sleep.
Juni: And I left the note. I'm pretty sure she can read.
Sam: Are you sure we should go straight to the Corentins' home? I'd like to go back to Cyn's and get some shoes first.
Juni: Meh, shoes. What is it with the South and clothing? Shoes, shirts, pants... why do we separate ourselves from the world?
Sam: It's not separation so much as protection. Haven't you ever stepped on anything sharp?
Juni: Of course. So I learned not to.
Sam: And sharing a seat with someone else's bare rectum... that's just gross.
Sam: Also, my hooves are starting to crack.
Juni: You wouldn't get damaged if you'd just pay attention to your surroun-
[Juni bumps into Tanya Harris]
Tanya: Hey! Watch where you're goin', will ya?!
[Tanya turns around and sees Sam]
Tanya: Oh, it's you.
Sam: Tanya...?

Comments

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03/16/2009 11:52 am 
I need to get better about conveying action. In the sketch it was a lot more apparent that Juni actually bumped into Tanya. Maybe I need to stop doing so much background-layer crap (I have been experimenting with simplifying my backgrounds a lot but I guess I need to take it a step further).

Also it occurs to me that pretty much 95% of the time, the setting in the comic doesn't have much (if any) relevance to what's going on, aside from establishing that damn do my characters spend a lot of time walking from point A to point B.
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03/16/2009 07:00 pm 
A white mark helps slightly.

Okay whatever, anyone who has read the comments knows what's going on, right?
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