[[Juni walks into the bedroom room with the purple jacket folded over one arm. A note lies on the bed, written in Hiero.]]
Juni: [[reading]] Dear Juni, I'm sorry, but I need some time <[[in Sam's voice]]to think about things|[[in internal non-voice]]away from you>. I'm staying with Cyn. When things settle down, hopefully you'll know where to find me.
For what it's worth, I used a thicker brush than usual while drawing this one (and a lighter touch), just to see if I could get more organic forms. I kind of like the stylistic difference that led to.
Also, we can finally see the entryway to Juni's apartment. (I actually had designed it before -- the view from above was purposeful -- but never had an opportunity to show it. Though I guess it didn't use to have the glass or the railing, but whatever. Or maybe it was originally opaque white? It's not like I draw blueprints of this stuff.)
And, uh, I was really resistant to put any sort of (legible) written text in-frame but it finally became unavoidable. The vocabulary is more or less consistent but the grammar is a bit simplistic, and right now it reads too much like a substitution from monkey-speak. Plus I copped out borrowed the phonetic alphabet from another (real-world) language. Maybe I'll develop it further. I probably won't.
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Also, we can finally see the entryway to Juni's apartment. (I actually had designed it before -- the view from above was purposeful -- but never had an opportunity to show it. Though I guess it didn't use to have the glass or the railing, but whatever. Or maybe it was originally opaque white? It's not like I draw blueprints of this stuff.)
And, uh, I was really resistant to put any sort of (legible) written text in-frame but it finally became unavoidable. The vocabulary is more or less consistent but the grammar is a bit simplistic, and right now it reads too much like a substitution from monkey-speak. Plus I copped out borrowed the phonetic alphabet from another (real-world) language. Maybe I'll develop it further. I probably won't.